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experiencing paradise
Posted: Mon Apr 26, 2010 2:48 pm
by kampanaryo_spy
As far as spelling goes, the old Bretania is dead. But from its ashes, the new Britania rises!
A morning after Easter, the gang was sharing food and laughs at Japan’s when someone said: “Why don’t we go to Britania?” And just like that, we did!
Japan borrowed a van whose fan belt was so loose it screamed. The only way you could hush it, the mechanic said, was by shutting off the air-conditioning system. And just like that, we did!
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Re: experiencing paradise
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 8:31 am
by pato
No words can add more to express your article because you’ve said it all truthfully, beautifully, ---uno anhi bagan sa wid all the ly --- and described it artistically and justly --- lang –an takaw! May rhyme sa isab.
After through reading it, I think to myself, “ I must have been lucky and grateful enough because I had the chance to be invited and be joining with you and your selected few friends in that wonderful island, while wading joyfully in the rippling crystal clear water and be amazed by its purely refined white sand.
That was my very first time to that island. And as soon as we’ve finally docked, I felt excited. Britania Island for me is an island that you will truly be enchanted.
Re: experiencing paradise
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:30 am
by kampanaryo_spy
pato wrote:No words can add more to express your article because you’ve said it all truthfully, beautifully, ---uno anhi bagan sa wid all the ly --- and described it artistically and justly --- lang –an takaw! May rhyme sa isab.
hahahahahaha!
di ba inlang-an ta na kaw na hinay hinayi pag kuhan adverbs (ending in "ly") sa mga tingganon mo? 
adverbs (unless they modify rather than intensify) don't serve much purpose in good writing. oopps, the teacher in me is at work again.
Re: experiencing paradise
Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 8:42 pm
by SIBULING
Korek kaw gayud Spy,mabibuhi na panaw yadto.Kay habang gaandar kita,ya hibaw an baya nato na may tukada an made in japan na van na iyo binuslan.Pga uli ta,inkadiskubrehan nan ato driver na maabre baya an atup,kuwang dakan kita mag search ng mutya ng Van.Asta nan pag uli ta mga lamii na tukada ,amo?Malamii ma inlove.labi na mmati sa ngatukada habang papauli kita.,amo?MIngawii dayun.Kadayaw dayun ilupad.
